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cherish
So far away
I still feel you're touch
I still hear you're heart
The whispers to cherish
To hold for safe keeping
In our hearts and minds
To wish for in time
To speak of love
Eases the pain
So far away
I still feel you're touch
I still hear you're heart
The whispers to cherish
To hold for safe keeping
In our hearts and minds
To wish for in time
To speak of love
Eases the pain
So far away
Published 28th Jan 2013
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
28th Jan 2013 9:14am
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28th Jan 2013 10:33am
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28th Jan 2013 11:56am
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28th Jan 2013 1:16pm
glad you liked it my friend
yes we all at somepoint get loved up
gets us all creative in our writings
its a good thing :)
yes we all at somepoint get loved up
gets us all creative in our writings
its a good thing :)
5th May 2013 12:48pm
Beautiful, perhaps you could expand on it a bit, possibly add a bit more? Whatever you choose to do it's still a great poem! :)
5th May 2013 3:34pm
i did when i wrote it out think about expanding
but sometimes its best or feels best on some poems to leave the reader wanting more :)
thankyou for reading and comments :)
but sometimes its best or feels best on some poems to leave the reader wanting more :)
thankyou for reading and comments :)
6th Sep 2013 3:02pm
