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I dont know
Yesterday all the street lights shut off when I walked
underneath them
I sang my heart in, all alone,
While my eyes cracked open, despite the drought
Im high now thinkin about jumpin down
Been thinkin bout coppin-out
Isn't this always how it is, the same shit again and again
Dont know how im feelin, so it must not be good
Numbness replaced the feeling, and theres no getting it back
Im as good as dead
underneath them
I sang my heart in, all alone,
While my eyes cracked open, despite the drought
Im high now thinkin about jumpin down
Been thinkin bout coppin-out
Isn't this always how it is, the same shit again and again
Dont know how im feelin, so it must not be good
Numbness replaced the feeling, and theres no getting it back
Im as good as dead
Published 28th Jan 2013
| Edited 26th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2013 8:51am
Cool poem, e.
Love the flow.
Just a quick needed for spelling and some apostrophes missing...maybe? :-)
Pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers
Tidespotter
Love the flow.
Just a quick needed for spelling and some apostrophes missing...maybe? :-)
Pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers
Tidespotter
29th Jan 2013 9:55pm
good stuff...you are relaxing and loosing your inhibitions...now go and get a bit more mellifluous with that guitar ;-}
30th Jan 2013 2:57pm
I've still been writing just not on here. And look at what I'm about to post for you before its all I got or I'll be late;) idk why but youre comment motivated me to play something.. I'll put up a song of mine after I finish it up
Anonymous
26th Mar 2013 9:45am
Nice write..the only constant in life is change, so never make a permanent solution to a temporary problem..it gets better, then sux again..it's life and we are here to learn and hopefully have a little fun with it.
26th Mar 2013 10:52am
I'm aware of everything you said beside that this is a good write. Thanks:)
And a little fun? Please tell me you're having more than a little fun.
And a little fun? Please tell me you're having more than a little fun.
Anonymous
26th Mar 2013 11:16am
oh, I have my day's but overall.."I may be going to hell in a bucket, but at least I'm enjoying the ride" J. Garcia
:-)
:-)
