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Well fuck books.
Books tell me
a thunderclap
is one hundred and
twenty decibels
but it also
tells me
that
you breathing
is ten decibels,
and honestly
the sound of
your breath
seems
louder
than any
thunderclap
i've heard.
----
a thunderclap
is one hundred and
twenty decibels
but it also
tells me
that
you breathing
is ten decibels,
and honestly
the sound of
your breath
seems
louder
than any
thunderclap
i've heard.
----
Published 27th Jan 2013
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27th Jan 2013 3:22am
Anonymous
27th Jan 2013 4:09am
Very interesting & enjoyable read, Will. Excellent pen! :)
Carlene
Carlene
27th Jan 2013 4:51am
27th Jan 2013 6:57am
Oh wow, I have some competition! You've got a really good sense of rhythm and use of line breaks. I really applaud your content, the sense of emotion is poignant. I've actually got a similar poem (or at least I view it as similar). Look up 'a point of uncertainty' in my poems if you're interested. I get the same vibe from yours which is really cool to me. Keep it up and thanks for the follow!
