deepundergroundpoetry.com
TRUST ME: he said/she said
He said...
"Trust me baby" as he looks into her eyes.
But the reflection looking back was a mirror
to his lies.
She said...
"understand me honey!"
He said...
"I do baby, I do!' But his actions are concerning
and she wonders if he's true.
He said...
If you love me you'll never give my coochie away."
She said...
"If you love me why do go astray? Give love at home
a chance, this we should agree!
You grow, I grow...you NEED to trust me!
"Trust me baby" as he looks into her eyes.
But the reflection looking back was a mirror
to his lies.
She said...
"understand me honey!"
He said...
"I do baby, I do!' But his actions are concerning
and she wonders if he's true.
He said...
If you love me you'll never give my coochie away."
She said...
"If you love me why do go astray? Give love at home
a chance, this we should agree!
You grow, I grow...you NEED to trust me!
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 0
comments 18
reads 856
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 7:07pm
re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 7:19pm
Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 7:36pm
re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 9:41pm
Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 8:42pm
mmmmm I could trust those beautiful words..the coochie mustve been good if hes begging to keep it to him self lol
1
re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 9:43pm
Haaaa! bey boi picked up on it! I thought using the word "coochie" would be different! ;)
re: re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 10:51pm
haha aww sweetheart. I know what coochie and punany means.. I love how you write ;)
1
re: re: re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 10:58pm
re: re: re: re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 11:41pm
Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 10:16pm
re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
26th Jan 2013 11:00pm
Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
28th Jan 2013 4:09am
re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
28th Jan 2013 7:39pm
Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
29th Jan 2013 2:39am
re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
29th Jan 2013 6:06pm
LOL! yeah, it should be resolved...I haven't come up with one...yet!
Thank you for reading :)
Thank you for reading :)
Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
16th Apr 2013 4:09am
re: Re: TRUST ME: he said/she said
16th Apr 2013 4:13am