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bell book & candle
Reaching in Her bag She pulled out some tricks
Bell book & candle
Robe oils & hope
The lighting of the candle
Softly gave the room the look She desired
Slipping out daytime
feeling more nightkind
Dons Her velvet robe
Deepened delicious desires
Her hopes are to feed the man across the street
The art to ringing the bell
Is in claim of sensual spirituality
Feedings to his fires
Burning his soul with unrepressed completeness
Her book it shows
How it is, to this man She knows
It breathes Her magic prose ,love ,poemS
She wasn't waiting any longer
This was to be perfect
All to be Hers
This the claimed man
A bell rings
"Everytime a bell rings an angel gets its wings"--its a wonderful life
Bell book & candle
Robe oils & hope
The lighting of the candle
Softly gave the room the look She desired
Slipping out daytime
feeling more nightkind
Dons Her velvet robe
Deepened delicious desires
Her hopes are to feed the man across the street
The art to ringing the bell
Is in claim of sensual spirituality
Feedings to his fires
Burning his soul with unrepressed completeness
Her book it shows
How it is, to this man She knows
It breathes Her magic prose ,love ,poemS
She wasn't waiting any longer
This was to be perfect
All to be Hers
This the claimed man
A bell rings
"Everytime a bell rings an angel gets its wings"--its a wonderful life
Published 25th Jan 2013
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25th Jan 2013 9:59am
I know many who would use this method to get her man, I prefer the natural allure.
Great imagery and pen Soul. :)
Great imagery and pen Soul. :)
25th Jan 2013 12:08pm
Lol I do agree with alll that Magdalena;) this was simply to see if I could figure it....I'm trying to go as many directions as I can ...just to see HOW it works...I wish I coudive done this better...not being properly learned in all the forms...there names why its this way or that how many lines is this etc etc...I just grab at the rythms I've read
......past few I've ran here there n everywhere are the crude attempts of a rhymer to think different than the four walls he's contained...thanks VERY much as always Dear Magdalena!!!
......past few I've ran here there n everywhere are the crude attempts of a rhymer to think different than the four walls he's contained...thanks VERY much as always Dear Magdalena!!!
25th Jan 2013 4:48pm
That was so awesome man!!!!!!!11
Brilliant piece and great read
PEN ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
Brilliant piece and great read
PEN ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
25th Jan 2013 5:36pm
Geez Lance Thanx ALOT buddy!!!
That means MUCHO much coming from You!!!
That means MUCHO much coming from You!!!
25th Jan 2013 9:17pm
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25th Jan 2013 11:24pm
26th Jan 2013 1:55am
The title alone left me wanting more...great write. I am a 1st time reader of your work. It wont be the last either.
KG
KG
26th Jan 2013 4:01pm
Thanx a lot KG!!!
The title is an old flick I grew up on
With jimmy stuart and Kim Novak as the lead...odd thing is...I made reference to another of their movies in another poem curving clause...putting a quote from it...written at the same time...I do not know the rhyme or reason to that pure accident...odd
Thanx for the props and read Sir!!!
The title is an old flick I grew up on
With jimmy stuart and Kim Novak as the lead...odd thing is...I made reference to another of their movies in another poem curving clause...putting a quote from it...written at the same time...I do not know the rhyme or reason to that pure accident...odd
Thanx for the props and read Sir!!!
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27th Jan 2013 10:15pm
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28th Jan 2013 6:39am
2nd Apr 2013 6:19am
This was different! I see what she wants and desire.....to claim her man,eh?! :)
2nd Apr 2013 6:31am
