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Early Promises

He sits in the forrest
peace for himself
Empty moments alone
only loneliness felt

He thinks of a woman
she can never be his
He wants her beside him
partnership bliss

Her eyes saying sorry
she looks at him
He knows that her heart
A woman will win

She smiles at him
loves like a friend
He feels much more
wants it to end

She thinks he is ok
one day will find love
He cannot let go
he takes it above

She found him sleeping
He will never wake
Who she can love
not her mistake.
Written by becsta (Bec)
Published | Edited 5th Apr 2013
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