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But every girl's a whore.
She's all
thrown out love letters
bus times, perfume
scented
over wet pussy
and dilated pupils
Her fingers are syringes
filled with Novocain
and her mouth
seems
to be the same.
You'll notice her cum,
but you won't
notice her leave
but as
we say
to our
mothers,
bosses,
and friends
you'd never
love
another whore
again.
thrown out love letters
bus times, perfume
scented
over wet pussy
and dilated pupils
Her fingers are syringes
filled with Novocain
and her mouth
seems
to be the same.
You'll notice her cum,
but you won't
notice her leave
but as
we say
to our
mothers,
bosses,
and friends
you'd never
love
another whore
again.
Published 22nd Jan 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2013 2:50pm
Jaded much? The "girl" in me wants to balk at this slap to every girl's face but the objective reader's just nodding, thinking "well done". Going with it.. Well done!
22nd Jan 2013 2:55pm
This
"She's all
thrown out love letters
bus times, perfume
scented
over wet pussy
and dilated pupils
Her fingers are syringes
filled with Novocain
and her mouth
seems
to be the same.
You'll notice her cum,
but you won't
notice her leave"
is a wonderfully original take on an old idea.
Thoroughly enjoyed :)
"She's all
thrown out love letters
bus times, perfume
scented
over wet pussy
and dilated pupils
Her fingers are syringes
filled with Novocain
and her mouth
seems
to be the same.
You'll notice her cum,
but you won't
notice her leave"
is a wonderfully original take on an old idea.
Thoroughly enjoyed :)
23rd Jan 2013 2:29am
Thank you all!
Sorry if it was offensive or anything, just got this broken sense of longing hanging around hahah.
Sorry if it was offensive or anything, just got this broken sense of longing hanging around hahah.
re: Re: But every girl's a whore.
23rd Jan 2013 12:46pm
Never apologize for what you write.
One (wo)man's trash is another (wo)man's treasure.
True poets write objectively, for subjective audiences.
P.S.- And, every woman is. (All possess a cash box, they just charge different rates of return.)
Just as every man is a dog.
One (wo)man's trash is another (wo)man's treasure.
True poets write objectively, for subjective audiences.
P.S.- And, every woman is. (All possess a cash box, they just charge different rates of return.)
Just as every man is a dog.
23rd Jan 2013 12:53pm
I absolutely agree with Branch. You are not a safe writer, and that is NOT a bad thing.
One thing I have learned over the years is it really doesn't matter what I have to say in that context. It is about saying it well ;)
One thing I have learned over the years is it really doesn't matter what I have to say in that context. It is about saying it well ;)
