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round the world goes time continues even when every moment is torture to he soul the clock is the most dreaded and depended on technology in history in any form time is whats in every ones mind
Published 8th Aug 2010
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12th Aug 2010 5:07pm
im sorry to say that your poem is comfusing. there's not a dot not even a coma to seperate the words
