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So...
You think you know her
but her enormity of moods
proclaims you do not
that you could never know
as she tickles your toes on the beach
where the next dead whale will founder
Without notice
she may gather her skirts
and rush upon you in a rage
piling high the lump in her throat
drowning the fires
from some quake below
So,
could you ever feel safe
with your hotel balcony
on the third floor
knowing once she swallowed mountains
and all the world
grew fins
but her enormity of moods
proclaims you do not
that you could never know
as she tickles your toes on the beach
where the next dead whale will founder
Without notice
she may gather her skirts
and rush upon you in a rage
piling high the lump in her throat
drowning the fires
from some quake below
So,
could you ever feel safe
with your hotel balcony
on the third floor
knowing once she swallowed mountains
and all the world
grew fins
Published 16th Jan 2013
| Edited 14th Oct 2014
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17th Jan 2013 9:12pm
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here.. imagery is everything
for sure, this floated my raft
loved how eye didn't see it coming
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Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 12:21pm
Lovely, lovely write.
Dig the cryptic images and weird yet cool portraits you paint with your ink....
Do so thank you for sharing :-)
Please pen on, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Dig the cryptic images and weird yet cool portraits you paint with your ink....
Do so thank you for sharing :-)
Please pen on, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
10th Oct 2014 4:56am
