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kiss...
this kiss, this kiss
ahhh...tasteless yet it is the sweetest
makes you clumsy on a first date
once ended you can hardly wait
to have more of this kiss... :)
kiss on lips makes you shiver
on the throat gives you ardor
on the navel you drop your armor
on the center you moan with greatest pleasure... ;)
ahhh...tasteless yet it is the sweetest
makes you clumsy on a first date
once ended you can hardly wait
to have more of this kiss... :)
kiss on lips makes you shiver
on the throat gives you ardor
on the navel you drop your armor
on the center you moan with greatest pleasure... ;)
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re: Re: kiss...
15th Jan 2013 2:44am
Re: kiss...
15th Jan 2013 3:41am
....how delicious is the winning of a kiss at loves beginning.
Such a kissable read! :)
Such a kissable read! :)
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15th Jan 2013 11:09am
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15th Jan 2013 5:46am
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re: Re: kiss...
mmmm...this kissssss :-), this is for you sweet Kasupuu...thanx for dropping by :)
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15th Jan 2013 11:56am
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Re: kiss...
15th Jan 2013 6:53pm
Builds up to the second verse. It and the picture reminds me of the Bible's Song of Songs chapter 7 verse 2: "Your navel is a rounded goblet that never lacks blended wine."
The woman's answer to the narrator might be in rhyme:
"Your kiss gives pleasure most divine
Just above the bikini line!"
The woman's answer to the narrator might be in rhyme:
"Your kiss gives pleasure most divine
Just above the bikini line!"
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re: Re: kiss...
16th Jan 2013 1:53pm
mmm...that's right dear Solomon_Song... it really is devine ;), thnx for reading :)