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Torment
I close my eyes. The shadows crawl. My back is up against the wall. The sun comes out. The shadows flee. Until tonight, my mind is free. They hunt me down until I wake. I war with them for my sanity's sake. My shelter is shattered. My mentality, broken. they torture me until, by the sun, I'm awoken.
Published 14th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th Jan 2013 8:38am
14th Jan 2013 8:37am
Love the fleeting images.
And welcome to you!
A sense of movement...constantly flowing.
If a nightmare, rather unjarring.......?
Swell effort. :-)
Keep penning, K O A.
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. Who is it in the shadows that's hunting you so?
And welcome to you!
A sense of movement...constantly flowing.
If a nightmare, rather unjarring.......?
Swell effort. :-)
Keep penning, K O A.
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. Who is it in the shadows that's hunting you so?
15th Jan 2013 3:07pm
thank you for you words. I really appreciate it.
P.S. The shadows Identity depends on the reader.
P.S. The shadows Identity depends on the reader.
14th Jan 2013 10:23am
14th Jan 2013 4:31pm
