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unconventional suicide ii
swing that hammer straight into the frontal lobe
as hard as determination can throw it
if you don't die
comatose lobotomy
may be as close as you can bring her
as hard as determination can throw it
if you don't die
comatose lobotomy
may be as close as you can bring her
Published 5th Aug 2010
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5th Aug 2010 5:51pm
It's destruction leading to something beautiful and comforting again...you throw those ideas together just perfect.
5th Aug 2010 11:43pm
i see only beauty in death.. even though i know not what death brings.. perhaps I'm blinded by the love of the idea of leaving because it the quiet piece after wards that i envision.. even if it takes torrential destruction to get there
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5th Aug 2010 11:47pm
By "her," who're you referring to exactly? The brain? This one is just as brutal as the first unconventional suicide, especially the "comatose lobotomy" line. I often think I'd be happier if I smashed my brain against a wall or something, and made myself a dribbling retard. Like when I was at Burger King today and I saw these special needs people being pushed in their wheelchairs past the window. They seemed so content...
5th Aug 2010 11:52pm
by her i meant the suicide attempt.. if comatose is as far as i can bring her so be it.. because yeah ive had the same though that being a retard would be better than living fully functional and aware.. ignorance is bliss and those dribbling bastards havent a care in the world.. and theyre smiling at dumb little nothings.. and yeah i think that would be a whole lot better than depression.. because you wouldnt even notice the normals staring at you thinking youre wierd or gross ya know
