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a 5 star following

On the conscious path
new focus on less critic in me
healing hands without picky plans
back in local land
glimpses of you under worldly seams
skin sewn together, trapped in a tailors world
body like car use
accelerate and brake
love the speed of travel
young in a way forever
you stop my sights
on the road, I guess were travel partners
too used to a fuck before the next exit
destination in common
exchange print palm none beyond
though dont you know of life of a commit

snippet of the young thinking
were animals, critics with 5 star instincts
Written by mavement
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