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First Aid
With my love
I tried to bind the finger of your indifference
And stem the flow of your loneliness.
I tried to bind the finger of your indifference
And stem the flow of your loneliness.
Published 2nd Aug 2010
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2nd Aug 2010 6:03pm
i see more and more poets interested in the few lines poem. im a fan myself.
i love it how few words or maybe lines have the power and the depth to mean so much.
it's excellent
i love it how few words or maybe lines have the power and the depth to mean so much.
it's excellent
3rd Aug 2010 00:35am
12th Oct 2010 10:11am
i am just reading this for the first time and finding that i used the same "finger[s] of indifference" in one of my own writes! you had it first and did it well, i think i might have to alter mine a little bit. [:
Anonymous
26th Feb 2011 9:30pm
this is so full and deep, yet effortless.
really engages...
I like!
Steven
really engages...
I like!
Steven
2nd Jun 2011 5:34pm
