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Ro'manceToYoungLady / oldLove
~ y're
everything i/i/i
ever
wanted ~ every
thing
i/i canno
recall havin'had...
n'ow 10yrs[a]lonefool
makes for no'way to hit
yr
p r o verbial end[ga'me]
dear eliz(abeth), aye wouldn't mind
havin to let ye go so long ago, bu'why'd
ye
have to take
every (so/it/seems)body
[else]
wit ye?
XXXXXXXXXdkzk2013<<<
everything i/i/i
ever
wanted ~ every
thing
i/i canno
recall havin'had...
n'ow 10yrs[a]lonefool
makes for no'way to hit
yr
p r o verbial end[ga'me]
dear eliz(abeth), aye wouldn't mind
havin to let ye go so long ago, bu'why'd
ye
have to take
every (so/it/seems)body
[else]
wit ye?
XXXXXXXXXdkzk2013<<<
Published 6th Jan 2013
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6th Jan 2013 3:09pm
6th Jan 2013 10:39pm
6th Jan 2013 10:50pm
Daniel.
your style is unique, takes a bit of getting used to. there's a hell of a lot in the last couple of lines man.
a decent write, sir
your style is unique, takes a bit of getting used to. there's a hell of a lot in the last couple of lines man.
a decent write, sir
7th Jan 2013 1:48am
7th Jan 2013 00:00am
7th Jan 2013 1:49am
