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Lost in the shadows
Lost in the light
Without you with me im lost in the night
I look to the left
I look to the right
Im lost with visions of you flooding my sight
Please come and find me
Please ease my mind
For I'll stay lost with out you
My love I will keep confined
Lost in the light
Without you with me im lost in the night
I look to the left
I look to the right
Im lost with visions of you flooding my sight
Please come and find me
Please ease my mind
For I'll stay lost with out you
My love I will keep confined
Published 29th Dec 2012
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30th Dec 2012 11:27am
22nd Feb 2013 2:25pm
Nice job. I'm noticing the start of an anaphora scheme. Was that something you tried to do or something that just happened?
25th Feb 2013 7:30am
1st Apr 2013 1:56am
I read over it again, and this time I guess I just made better sense of it. I liked it more this time, so I added to my reading list ;)
