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as good as you make me
i am here
because you have
created me
drawing from you
your truth
your life experiences
i dwell inside
your earthly being
springing forth
from your hearts core
i long for expression
use me as you need me
i am the vehicle
behind that
driving need of
yours to be heard
i am your life-line
your path to peace
and fulfillment
use me wisely
for you are my master
while i am like
a soothing salve
i will never leave you
spurring you onward
i am your poetry
your unique form
of contribution
to all mankind
i am your emotional
release and
your reprieve
i am capable
of greatness and
can change peoples lives
i will live forever
but please remember
i am only as good
as you make me
because you have
created me
drawing from you
your truth
your life experiences
i dwell inside
your earthly being
springing forth
from your hearts core
i long for expression
use me as you need me
i am the vehicle
behind that
driving need of
yours to be heard
i am your life-line
your path to peace
and fulfillment
use me wisely
for you are my master
while i am like
a soothing salve
i will never leave you
spurring you onward
i am your poetry
your unique form
of contribution
to all mankind
i am your emotional
release and
your reprieve
i am capable
of greatness and
can change peoples lives
i will live forever
but please remember
i am only as good
as you make me
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Re: as good as you make me
24th Dec 2012 2:37pm
Dearest Faithmairee,
What a beautiful poem and so true ... really enjoyed reading your writing and your thoughts.
Much Love and Peace to you ... Bruce
What a beautiful poem and so true ... really enjoyed reading your writing and your thoughts.
Much Love and Peace to you ... Bruce
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re: Re: as good as you make me
24th Dec 2012 2:51pm
Dear Bruce-Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. You made my day.
All the best to you-Faith
All the best to you-Faith
Re: as good as you make me
24th Dec 2012 6:28pm
re: Re: as good as you make me
25th Dec 2012 1:06pm
Re: as good as you make me
Anonymous
24th Dec 2012 9:32pm
Such a lovely feel-good poem and a real "salve" for the heart. A graceful write, Faith. :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: Re: as good as you make me
25th Dec 2012 1:07pm
re: re: Re: as good as you make me
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Dec 2012 8:29pm
25th Dec 2012 8:27pm
You're welcome, Faith. A 'wonderful' poem deserves high praise. In re-reading this heart-felt write, several times, I noticed that the poem behind the poem or the deeper message, if you like... shines through. So your poem is not only a keeper but one to be reread as a kind of spiritual meditation.
All that said, means that I love it! :)
Carlene
All that said, means that I love it! :)
Carlene
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Re: as good as you make me
26th Dec 2012 4:04pm
Truer words have not been spoken! What a wonderful
expression, outstanding job on this one Faith!
DD
expression, outstanding job on this one Faith!
DD
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re: Re: as good as you make me
27th Dec 2012 3:25pm
Dear DD-Thank you! I'm thrilled you liked it that much. Happy New Year to you!
Re: as good as you make me
Anonymous
26th Dec 2012 11:39pm
"i am your emotional release and your reprieve"breathtaking read, enjoyed!
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re: Re: as good as you make me
27th Dec 2012 3:26pm
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. I really appreciate them. A very Happy New Year to you!
Re: as good as you make me
29th Dec 2012 4:57am
re: Re: as good as you make me
29th Dec 2012 5:49pm
Thanks so much, Rain. I'm honored by your wonderful remarks. Happy New Year to you!
Re: as good as you make me
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 6:56pm
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