My Husband

The letter and the 3 periods afterwards is unnecessary. The reader would understand the first letter of each line of the poem spells out the title of the poem.

Also, it's corny in an unpleasant way. If you mean it corny in a sarcastic sense, then okay, but this poems seems to ooze sappiness, which I personally find too typical of any sort of poem.

I'm not sure about any positive comments I can honestly give to this poem... good try?

Thank you for your honest advice. Learning everyday. Will give it another bash and hopefully, my next one will make for good reading.

A wonderful acrostic write Olga.  I agree you don't need the periods or the first "My Husband"  I usually put the first letters in bold to make them stand out. :)

Thank you for your advice Magdalena. Much appreciated :-)

Could make a verse for a wife-to-husband greeting card.

Thank you Solomon Song for the read and comment. A verse for a wife-to-husband greeting card is not too shabby, me thinks. :-)

Nice! Loving and passionate. Love the style. :)

Thank you flowergirl for reading and the lovely comment!

Olga :-)

What a wonderful dedication.Your husband is a lucky guy Olga.

Child of Sorrow,

Thank you for dropping by and leaving your wonderful comment. Much appreciated!

Olga :-)