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2014 my cannibalistic story
it had been two long dark years since the fire had hit.
2012
i think.
man i was so hungry,all out of resources,no good earth to grow.
felt as if somebody was repeatedly stabbing me in my stomach.
as if someone had filled me with broken glass,
and every step i took ripped my insides to shreds.
i began to look at the wife in a different sort of way.
even thou she looked anorexic,plenty of meat left on the old girl.
and dont forget plenty of marrow.tried to fight it,jesus, but the
hunger,the sickness,it won.
blurred axe blurred red axe.
as i spun the spit,i listened to the roast,blisters popping,
sizzling,all you could smell was burnt hair mixed with fire.
a deep dark shame came over me,and stained my soul forever.
crying into my food as i ripped flesh from the bone with my teeth,the guilt,
man the guilt.but god it was good.
i sat back full, hunger gone,and reminisced.
never felt the hunger since that day.
good old maz
2012
i think.
man i was so hungry,all out of resources,no good earth to grow.
felt as if somebody was repeatedly stabbing me in my stomach.
as if someone had filled me with broken glass,
and every step i took ripped my insides to shreds.
i began to look at the wife in a different sort of way.
even thou she looked anorexic,plenty of meat left on the old girl.
and dont forget plenty of marrow.tried to fight it,jesus, but the
hunger,the sickness,it won.
blurred axe blurred red axe.
as i spun the spit,i listened to the roast,blisters popping,
sizzling,all you could smell was burnt hair mixed with fire.
a deep dark shame came over me,and stained my soul forever.
crying into my food as i ripped flesh from the bone with my teeth,the guilt,
man the guilt.but god it was good.
i sat back full, hunger gone,and reminisced.
never felt the hunger since that day.
good old maz
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Re: 2014 my cannibalistic story
23rd Dec 2012 2:25pm
As doomsday scenarios go yours has a chilling helter-skelter hunger running through it...
happy mayan new year to you.
happy mayan new year to you.
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Re: 2014 my cannibalistic story
24th Dec 2012 9:37pm
hmmm...completely didn't take from you!
"i sat back full, hunger gone,and reminisced.
never felt the huger since that day." The last line made me re-read the whole poem! (Cerebral slowness sometimes lol)
"i sat back full, hunger gone,and reminisced.
never felt the huger since that day." The last line made me re-read the whole poem! (Cerebral slowness sometimes lol)
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Re: 2014 my cannibalistic story
3rd Jan 2013 10:31pm
I think the man should have offered his flesh to the flame for his woman to feast off. Lol.
An interesting story, made me smile all the way through.
Great work. :)
An interesting story, made me smile all the way through.
Great work. :)
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re: Re: 2014 my cannibalistic story
3rd Jan 2013 10:53pm
in an ideal world,lol
glad it made you smile,thank you for your comment Magdalena.
glad it made you smile,thank you for your comment Magdalena.
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re: Re: 2014 my cannibalistic story
8th Jan 2013 4:41am
thank you,Broomie
im honoured you would add this to your list,im glad it made you laugh,i was worried people wouldn't get the funny side to it,thank you
im honoured you would add this to your list,im glad it made you laugh,i was worried people wouldn't get the funny side to it,thank you
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Re: 2014 my cannibalistic story
8th Jan 2013 4:20am
*chuckles*
I use to tell my son that if a catastrophe should happen, one of his butt cheeks would keep us fed all winter. ( I use to threaten to kill Barney too ;) ) lol
He still gives me a suspicious eye when food gets low in the house. lol
Loved this ! LOL
I use to tell my son that if a catastrophe should happen, one of his butt cheeks would keep us fed all winter. ( I use to threaten to kill Barney too ;) ) lol
He still gives me a suspicious eye when food gets low in the house. lol
Loved this ! LOL
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re: Re: 2014 my cannibalistic story
8th Jan 2013 4:47am
my mom use to tell me and my sister,if we ever got stuck on a dessert island to eat her.but the funny thing is she was dead serious.
thank you for the comment,its always nice to geat positive ones.
thank you for the comment,its always nice to geat positive ones.
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re: Re: 2014 my cannibalistic story
8th Jan 2013 5:15pm
thank you gabriel,im glad you enjoyed it,also got to say supernatural quite a cool show,thank you
sean
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Re: 2014 my cannibalistic story
25th Jun 2013 9:32pm
Gave me the creeps: blurred axe blurred red axe - what a write! Can't say I love it but I certainly devoured and enjoyed it!
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