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love light
if you took
the sun and the moon
and all of the stars
put them in a room
their light could
not compare to
the brightest of light
in my delight
as i gaze into
the shimmering eyes
of the love
of my life
yes, my baby's love
is almighty bright
the sun and the moon
and all of the stars
put them in a room
their light could
not compare to
the brightest of light
in my delight
as i gaze into
the shimmering eyes
of the love
of my life
yes, my baby's love
is almighty bright
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2012 6:22pm
A beautiful poem, Faith, and I love the 'light' comparisons! :)

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24th Dec 2012 2:49pm
Yet another most beautiful poem ... Love the thoughts of this one ...
Love and Peace ... Bruce
Love and Peace ... Bruce
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