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i miss you!
i miss you,
maybe you could give me a clue?,ya know
just a few?
so i can find you,
wherever you may be
i miss you,
i cannot hear,
i cannot hear your clues,
not being around you tears my heart,
i just wish you were here!
i miss you,
i would do anything to say i do,
that i do love you,
you would listen wouldn't you?
if you could see me now,
you'd realize im shedding a tear .
please come back, i would love to hold you, kiis you..
and say...
i missed you
( not mine-got it in an email)
maybe you could give me a clue?,ya know
just a few?
so i can find you,
wherever you may be
i miss you,
i cannot hear,
i cannot hear your clues,
not being around you tears my heart,
i just wish you were here!
i miss you,
i would do anything to say i do,
that i do love you,
you would listen wouldn't you?
if you could see me now,
you'd realize im shedding a tear .
please come back, i would love to hold you, kiis you..
and say...
i missed you
( not mine-got it in an email)
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Re: i miss you!
19th Dec 2012 1:08am
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19th Dec 2012 9:52pm
Re: i miss you!
19th Dec 2012 1:08am
Re: i miss you!
19th Dec 2012 1:09am
no, it was an old poem about you, but i just had to publish it sorry;(
-raven
-raven
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19th Dec 2012 1:10am
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Re: i miss you!
19th Dec 2012 1:47am
Re: i miss you!
20th Dec 2012 10:28pm
If it was about damien then
how did u get in an email?
anyway great piece xx
how did u get in an email?
anyway great piece xx
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Re: i miss you!
21st Dec 2012 1:10am
no... dikhead, i got it in an email from a friend to say it shoud be for him!
re: Re: i miss you!
24th Dec 2012 2:26pm
Oh dear... tough talkers steal my heart. ;-)
So this guy writes to himself! is that auto erotic texting? Sort of multi-tasking himself?
So this guy writes to himself! is that auto erotic texting? Sort of multi-tasking himself?
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Re: i miss you!
24th Dec 2012 11:22pm