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Teenagers
We shuck off friends
like clothing,
following the latest fad
as she said this
and he fucked her
Just a comedy of errors
and a game of betrayals
kids are armed with daggers
ready to shove into backs
unguarded
cuz like yo a stupid ass
muthafucka
like clothing,
following the latest fad
as she said this
and he fucked her
Just a comedy of errors
and a game of betrayals
kids are armed with daggers
ready to shove into backs
unguarded
cuz like yo a stupid ass
muthafucka
Published 16th Dec 2012
| Edited 8th Feb 2013
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18th Jan 2013 00:59am
I'd recommend spelling out the "lk" in the last stanza. It disrupts the flow because some readers may not be able to figure out that it means "like on the spot" Aside from that I like this. A poem about fake people of the world and how they'll back stab you in a heartbeat. It's one fucked up world we live in. Praise for shining light on this
19th Jan 2013 3:43am
19th Jan 2013 3:53am
