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somnambulist
on the edge ill always
stand,
it draws me forth,
stretching out its hand
shouting my name,
next to death
shooting dice,
this is who i am
n i dont wanna change,
(in the last line it says n i dont wanna change because i was/did,)
stand,
it draws me forth,
stretching out its hand
shouting my name,
next to death
shooting dice,
this is who i am
n i dont wanna change,
(in the last line it says n i dont wanna change because i was/did,)
Published 15th Dec 2012
| Edited 16th Dec 2012
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16th Dec 2012 10:40pm
1st line and with respect shouldn't it be with a '
so makes it
"on the edge i'll always"
or are you indulging in 'poetic license'
so makes it
"on the edge i'll always"
or are you indulging in 'poetic license'
16th Dec 2012 10:55pm
what do you mean one of these thing (')
i dont really use em haha i dont need too
and what do u mean by the last line?
if im understanding it right i guess the not caring about proper grammer or whatever is just another way for me to express.. like i cant explain it haha
i dont really use em haha i dont need too
and what do u mean by the last line?
if im understanding it right i guess the not caring about proper grammer or whatever is just another way for me to express.. like i cant explain it haha
16th Dec 2012 11:58pm
