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you dont have to drown
i dont know
what your thinking
diving headfirst
into the darkness
trust me
i know its scary
trying to live your life
a life thats so demanding
knowing youve lost the fight
dont be stupid
just take my hand
get from under the water
dont be scared to break the surface
just get back to living
sputter and get some air
when you get up ill be there
drowning in my pit of sorrow
knowing there is no tomorrow
its ok to cryhere baby
youresafe now
what your thinking
diving headfirst
into the darkness
trust me
i know its scary
trying to live your life
a life thats so demanding
knowing youve lost the fight
dont be stupid
just take my hand
get from under the water
dont be scared to break the surface
just get back to living
sputter and get some air
when you get up ill be there
drowning in my pit of sorrow
knowing there is no tomorrow
its ok to cryhere baby
youresafe now
Published 14th Dec 2012
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2012 10:43pm
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16th Dec 2012 11:26pm
What I really like about this is I can feel what you're writing, and I think that's one of the most important parts of writing a song.
17th Dec 2012 4:29pm
Reminds me of the story about Robert F. Kennedy; at four he wanted to make an impression, usually being considered the "runt" of the family. From the boat he decided to jump straight off into the Atlantic. His brother Joe Jr. pulls him out. John Kennedy said that either "took tons of courage or was the dumbest thing he ever saw".
Like the metaphor at the end.
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Like the metaphor at the end.
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