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"Heaven"
Here on earth imperfection , there in heaven perfection ~ Here on earth discontent , there in heaven content ~ Here on earth discrace , there in heaven grace ~" Heaven" Where the streets are made of gold , where you never age or grow old ~ Where the life secrets unfold , Heaven , where the secrets are told ~ Heaven , where we are free , Heaven , can't you see ? Heaven , it's for you and for me , Heaven , when we are free . B.
Published 13th Dec 2012
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2012 10:28am
Nicely written...
Maybe better in short stanzas?
(just a thought)
Maybe better in short stanzas?
(just a thought)
14th Dec 2012 6:44pm
This is just the way I formatted my poetry , I like it cause it doesn't look the same as everybody elses . I try to be a little different so it will catch the eye . I think this is formatted well to where the way you read it it makes out to where it also rhymes from the comma to the "~" in each line . Thank you I appreciate your comment and you taking your time to even read it .
