someone special

thanks a lot and im so happy you enjoyed reading some of my poetry:)

Beautiful write of love and devotion. :)

reading over this i really want to change a lot of it, if you read it right it sound good i guess but otherwise is sounds like a bunch of drunkenness haha, but thanks.. and not to sound demeaning about myself but what about the poem is it that you like exactly? sorry if thats a stupid question.

I will tell you like others. I have changed some poetry at times. Now, it is what it is. The original feelings is what I stay with. If you change your words cause of opinions, it no longer is your poem, your heart, your feelings or your views. Writing how you see it (good or bad) is apart of your personlity. The part of is what makes the poem what it is. Don't change you!!! :)

I like the poem cause of the way it started out on the dark side, then turnd into the love part of how you see her deep inside. I love poems that show reality on both sides. :)

its just i have no idea what i was talking about really, just makin metaphors with no real definite meanings anyway. like it kind of does.. and its not that i think its bad because of anything changed. its just simply i dont think this is a good write. i kinda like it too tho idk what im thinkin, my feelings are all gumbbled up for this.