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alone
I am all alone in the darkness
i walk alone on this lonly road
i am the only soul to be seen
i am the only shadow to be seen
i am the only voice to not be heard
i am the one who died
i am the one who was all alone
i died because of u and i will never see the gates of st peters bergh u took away my life and sent me to hell for eternity
i walk alone on this lonly road
i am the only soul to be seen
i am the only shadow to be seen
i am the only voice to not be heard
i am the one who died
i am the one who was all alone
i died because of u and i will never see the gates of st peters bergh u took away my life and sent me to hell for eternity
Published 12th Dec 2012
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21st Jan 2013 6:07pm
I'm lovin this part here "i am the only soul to be seen
i am the only shadow to be seen
i am the only voice to not be heard" If you're looking for a professional look for your poetry I would recommend spelling all words and capitalizing the first word of every sentence. Aside from that. Well done
Chaos_Collector
i am the only shadow to be seen
i am the only voice to not be heard" If you're looking for a professional look for your poetry I would recommend spelling all words and capitalizing the first word of every sentence. Aside from that. Well done
Chaos_Collector
