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Foregone Conclusion
Sometimes
patched together
puzzle pieces
produce
Salvador Dali-esque
self portraits
of mass confusion
combined
with precious few
otherwise salvageable
gems, swimming
in an opaque sea of
molasses covered
cereal suitable
only for sopping up
copious dribbles
of spilled milk.
patched together
puzzle pieces
produce
Salvador Dali-esque
self portraits
of mass confusion
combined
with precious few
otherwise salvageable
gems, swimming
in an opaque sea of
molasses covered
cereal suitable
only for sopping up
copious dribbles
of spilled milk.
Published 10th Dec 2012
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10th Dec 2012 9:16pm
alliteration dribles of off the tongue to begin and milk dribles off the mole asses at the end...wow you are getting too smooth for words to express...nice one RW
10th Dec 2012 9:39pm
Heehee... poetry beats a six pack or a fifth every time. AA should employ it, eh? Thanks, friend.
11th Dec 2012 9:03pm
11th Dec 2012 9:21pm
10th Dec 2012 9:20pm
*chuckles*
I personally love the sarcasm in this.
To borrow my husband's favorite comment,
Excellent ! :)
I personally love the sarcasm in this.
To borrow my husband's favorite comment,
Excellent ! :)
10th Dec 2012 9:41pm
I am nothing if not getting even with ghosts. And what does it matter in the long run? Thank you for your kindness, Maggie. Take care, Mary Ann
18th Dec 2012 6:22pm
Oooh, this piece was pertinent to another time and place (especially place). I have enjoyed my brief time on DU so far. Thank you, Spinoza - very much appreciated.
28th Dec 2012 9:30pm
Pain produces the finest poetry
and this is no exception,
Short and captivating
and interesting piece,
Wanted more yet just right!
Best wishes
Rice
29th Dec 2012 1:27am
