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Serenity
Will you concede, allow my ease and amenity
From thee that fevers you, that burdens
Spirit away the anguish in artless harbor
Let me sunder the ties that bind
The body a vessel for intention
Nevermore to restrain, left for Earth
And climb the amber sunsets
Take haste to the empyrean skies
Lift out of captive atmospheres
Gyre through red chemical empathy
For I am the privilege of your pursuit
The lesser amassed in a physical realm
Just passed periphery but still intact
Mindful, am I the whole of what you seek?
From thee that fevers you, that burdens
Spirit away the anguish in artless harbor
Let me sunder the ties that bind
The body a vessel for intention
Nevermore to restrain, left for Earth
And climb the amber sunsets
Take haste to the empyrean skies
Lift out of captive atmospheres
Gyre through red chemical empathy
For I am the privilege of your pursuit
The lesser amassed in a physical realm
Just passed periphery but still intact
Mindful, am I the whole of what you seek?
Published 9th Dec 2012
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10th Dec 2012 7:49am
A splendid spiritual journey, my friend! Your poetry is quite esoteric and beautiful, I must say. I have read several of yours on here this night, and each of them enchanted me greatly.
This poem had a great spirituality to it, a great and tremendous passion to the words, and that harmony betwixt worldliness and transcendence was a great balancing of concepts and ideas. There is much depth here to be discovered, and I enjoyed the journey this poem took me on. Thanks for it! :D
This poem had a great spirituality to it, a great and tremendous passion to the words, and that harmony betwixt worldliness and transcendence was a great balancing of concepts and ideas. There is much depth here to be discovered, and I enjoyed the journey this poem took me on. Thanks for it! :D
24th Dec 2015 10:31pm
Mysterious and bouncy.... No comma before 'that' and shouldn't start a phrase... Some crucial intentions where the simplicity fades. Keep Grindin CAOS737
