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With Love's Eyes
I gaze upon you with love's eyes
peering beneath the lust disguise
While our passion just burnt bright
I still thirst for your softer light
So after bodies entwined whole
comes a conjoining of the soul
The peeling away of all diurnal
to drink in that which is eternal
peering beneath the lust disguise
While our passion just burnt bright
I still thirst for your softer light
So after bodies entwined whole
comes a conjoining of the soul
The peeling away of all diurnal
to drink in that which is eternal
Published 8th Dec 2012
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8th Dec 2012 1:33pm
8th Dec 2012 1:37pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Dec 2012 3:01pm
8th Dec 2012 2:15pm
Lovely write, Sir!
Strider...how many days and a wake-up now?!
Strider...how many days and a wake-up now?!
8th Dec 2012 2:23pm
8th Dec 2012 5:19pm
8th Dec 2012 5:31pm
Thanks Mary. Decided to try to tackle rhyme and meter ... I am going to a three day writing retreat after the New Year.
13th Dec 2012 4:56am
Yay! I love it! Feels good to hang out with the rhymey bottom feeders now and then, huh? :D
"to drink in that which is eternal"
Ahhhhhhh very nice!
"to drink in that which is eternal"
Ahhhhhhh very nice!
