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A Moment
We danced to music heard only by the heart
he held me tight
lost in that moment
I actually cried
if only I knew then what I know today
I wouldn't have cried I would have laughed
crazy what a moment will have you thinking
glad the moment passed so quickly
danced to music heard only by the heart
hilarious
he held me tight
lost in that moment
I actually cried
if only I knew then what I know today
I wouldn't have cried I would have laughed
crazy what a moment will have you thinking
glad the moment passed so quickly
danced to music heard only by the heart
hilarious
Published 7th Dec 2012
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7th Dec 2012 4:16pm
love the poem and the picture suits it perfectly...can't pick a favorite line because they are all great
7th Dec 2012 4:19pm
7th Dec 2012 6:22pm
A precious moment, fleeting...
Good capture.
(In this line: "I wouldn't of cried I would have laughed", it should say
"I wouldn't HAVE cried, I would have laughed"
tiny grammar correction..)
Good capture.
(In this line: "I wouldn't of cried I would have laughed", it should say
"I wouldn't HAVE cried, I would have laughed"
tiny grammar correction..)
thanks for that Ataki!
:)
my grammar and spelling suck...always have...
that really blows when you love to write :)
:)
my grammar and spelling suck...always have...
that really blows when you love to write :)
7th Dec 2012 9:55pm
7th Dec 2012 9:56pm
7th Dec 2012 11:52pm
Very nicely done with this Nikkimoe. An embrace of ecstatic dance-- happens.
Enjoyed the read.
Uley
Enjoyed the read.
Uley
8th Dec 2012 2:29am
8th Dec 2012 1:34pm
What better time then winter is there to bring the ton-ton out! Thanks cjflier!
