deepundergroundpoetry.com
SOMETIMES
Someone says your name
Somewhere in a crowd
Sometimes I'll feel a pain
If I hear them reference you out loud
Sometimes I'll recall
A tender moment, here or there
Sometimes I'll see your face
Beneath cascading, jet-black hair
Sometimes I'll try to blank
Those fleeting thoughts of you
Times I heard you say
Need to find that someone new
Sometimes I'll feel the love
Each stolen moment that we shared
Times you said you loved me
Times you said you cared
Sometimes the urge to weigh
The good against the bad
I'll then remember with a smile
All the good times that we had
Somewhere in a crowd
Sometimes I'll feel a pain
If I hear them reference you out loud
Sometimes I'll recall
A tender moment, here or there
Sometimes I'll see your face
Beneath cascading, jet-black hair
Sometimes I'll try to blank
Those fleeting thoughts of you
Times I heard you say
Need to find that someone new
Sometimes I'll feel the love
Each stolen moment that we shared
Times you said you loved me
Times you said you cared
Sometimes the urge to weigh
The good against the bad
I'll then remember with a smile
All the good times that we had
Published 7th Dec 2012
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1
reading list entries 0
comments 1
reads 578
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
10th Jan 2013 4:50pm
This poem to me seemed rather bittersweet. In the beginning of the poem, you began painting an image in my head with the second stanza but then you stopped. I wouldve loved to see some imagery throughout the poem. On the flip side, the flow of the poem seems solid because there was nothing that really had me stop or distract me from the poem as a whole which is good. Keep the writes
