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One Shot
one shot
one fix
one more
just in case
sleep deprived
counting time
remembering that
bitter taste
what you want
what you need
you stop
and count in haste
a pre-spent life
of hurt and fear
too real just
to fade away
one fix
one more
just in case
sleep deprived
counting time
remembering that
bitter taste
what you want
what you need
you stop
and count in haste
a pre-spent life
of hurt and fear
too real just
to fade away
Published 6th Dec 2012
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25th Sep 2013 2:00pm
This bring prisoners of war and political hostages to mind. Is this what you were aiming for? Very strong language, however more graphic imagery would complete this (:
