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Do you not see?
Do you not see my fuse is short?
Do you not see my tongue is sharp?
Do you not see my patience is low?
Do you not see my mind is perfect?
Do you not see my insanity is misjudged?
Do you not see my thoughts are genius?
Do you not see my body is restless?
Do you not see my knife is thirsty?
Do you not see the bloody corpse?[/font]
Do you not see my tongue is sharp?
Do you not see my patience is low?
Do you not see my mind is perfect?
Do you not see my insanity is misjudged?
Do you not see my thoughts are genius?
Do you not see my body is restless?
Do you not see my knife is thirsty?
Do you not see the bloody corpse?[/font]
Published 5th Jul 2010
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29th Jul 2010 5:12pm
This is fucking awesome. I love how its written, and I also like the images it gives me. A dark room, a woman with a knife saying this words again and again while she aproaches and you just KNOW something bad is gonna happen!
1st Aug 2010 8:01am
22nd Feb 2012 6:19pm
Well I've gone through a ton of your poems and I have to say, your great hun, love your stuff
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