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Set Myself
Break my false skin
Tear me apart
See what lies within
The truth to my heart
The crimson is falling
As I shut my eyes
Inside I am calling
Trying to decipher the lies
The blade sinks in
Penetrating deep
my new found skin
Death isn't cheap
Carving off my mask
Complete life's test
Freedom my last task
Fill my last request
Have you ever see the real me
Or did I never set myself free?
Tear me apart
See what lies within
The truth to my heart
The crimson is falling
As I shut my eyes
Inside I am calling
Trying to decipher the lies
The blade sinks in
Penetrating deep
my new found skin
Death isn't cheap
Carving off my mask
Complete life's test
Freedom my last task
Fill my last request
Have you ever see the real me
Or did I never set myself free?
Published 2nd Dec 2012
| Edited 3rd Dec 2012
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3rd Dec 2012 10:48pm
I like your sense of rhythm a lot. One suggestion might be to count syllables, that is if you're still wanting advice. But this is good, I enjoyed it.
4th Dec 2012 11:09pm
Thanks, I just counted the syllables and wow, I really should Count those. . . That was a mess
