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Heart Swell
He wishes the sky was white. Actually, he
bids it be no color, so he can
see the stars in the daytime.
He creates the tree in many colors, then
gives it away. He notices the smallest
strokes in treasured masterpieces.
He is flawed, mercifully. An angel would
be sent on holy missions. Keep ‘perfect’ for
instanced Nirvanas, let him be.
Published 2nd Dec 2012
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Atakti
For me, you speak of my son here, 25, a 155 I.Q., and Autistic. Quirky as the come, but oh how I love to walk through the world with him as my guide. lol
Great great piece you got here :)
For me, you speak of my son here, 25, a 155 I.Q., and Autistic. Quirky as the come, but oh how I love to walk through the world with him as my guide. lol
Great great piece you got here :)
2nd Dec 2012 9:00pm
Maggie,
I wasn't aiming there, but don't you love it when the arrow hits an unplanned mark?
I'm so pleased you like it. :)
I wasn't aiming there, but don't you love it when the arrow hits an unplanned mark?
I'm so pleased you like it. :)
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2012 9:38pm
Really nice ataki!
Strider
Strider
3rd Dec 2012 7:12am
2nd Dec 2012 11:04pm
Oh let those of us without fault be named .... and should we spear a worthy heart be shamed .... the rest is life, is life and all that stuff .... Liked a lot dear writer, suffice to say well done
3rd Dec 2012 7:13am
3rd Dec 2012 7:33am
Brings to mind an artist with his brush and canvas.
Beautiful picture your words paint Atakti.
Beautiful picture your words paint Atakti.
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3rd Dec 2012 9:34pm
this one has me scratching my head. Have to read it again.........Still has me scratching my head; again...... still scratching..... I'll get it.... Okay, it almost feels like a "[C]reator's" critical admiration for a successful job well done, yet there is still room for improvement.
3rd Dec 2012 10:54pm
Lol, cj. I would be surprised if anyone got it, as I was deliberately obtuse. This one is for me. ;)
