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And that is how the fight started.
We'd just met.
Hadn't gotten to know her yet.
Chatted, smiled, winked.
Hand on her arm.
Licked her lips.
Hand on my arm.
Moved in closer.
Ready for a quick kiss.
Asked my name.
"Jay".
Said to her,
"Your name must be Ecstasy."
Laughed.
And said, "If you say so."
Hand moved to the back of her head.
A quick kiss.
A tap on my shoulder.
From behind.
Fear in her eyes.
"She's mine."
"Only I ride down that ecstasy lane."
And that is how the fight started.
Hadn't gotten to know her yet.
Chatted, smiled, winked.
Hand on her arm.
Licked her lips.
Hand on my arm.
Moved in closer.
Ready for a quick kiss.
Asked my name.
"Jay".
Said to her,
"Your name must be Ecstasy."
Laughed.
And said, "If you say so."
Hand moved to the back of her head.
A quick kiss.
A tap on my shoulder.
From behind.
Fear in her eyes.
"She's mine."
"Only I ride down that ecstasy lane."
And that is how the fight started.
Published 28th Nov 2012
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15th Jan 2013 00:52am
Damn! I didn't even see that coming!! Great stuff ;) ...so um, true story?...lol, im jus joking..;)
16th Jan 2013 9:13pm
Fantasy. Well, mostly. He actually said (and I am quoting here) "You want her? She's yours. And you GD two timing bitch, I never want to see you again."
I might do a sequel sometime about later that evening.
I might do a sequel sometime about later that evening.
20th Jan 2013 1:39am
You have a great way of drawing the reader into the story!:) Love this, very cute with fireworks at the end...that was crafty!
22nd Jan 2013 7:17pm
Thank you! I always enjoy your comments --especially since they are from a writer I much admire.
