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cutting
Cutting...
Hate, heart broken, hurt, pain, loneliness
Comes deep within
Is this really happening?
As the blade cuts into my skin..
I can run but i cant hide
What an addiction!!!
Why cant i stop?
Maybe wen the day come
that someone understands...
my feelings for you
will never end...
And neither with my blade!!!
Hate, heart broken, hurt, pain, loneliness
Comes deep within
Is this really happening?
As the blade cuts into my skin..
I can run but i cant hide
What an addiction!!!
Why cant i stop?
Maybe wen the day come
that someone understands...
my feelings for you
will never end...
And neither with my blade!!!
Published 28th Jun 2010
| Edited 19th Jul 2010
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28th Jun 2010 5:46pm
very good. i wrote a couple poems about cutting as well. i'll give you the titles and you could check them out. imagined or unleashed? i am the end.
28th Jun 2010 6:38pm
14th Jul 2010 7:49pm
i can easily relate to this poem.
i think it's very good :)
i kinda write darker poems but a few of them have cutting in them :)
nice work x
i think it's very good :)
i kinda write darker poems but a few of them have cutting in them :)
nice work x
24th Aug 2010 7:53am
2nd Sep 2010 00:38am
someone i know is a cutter.. they're trying to quit.. its a terrible addiction.. but which isn't right(?) I've seen her scars.. they make me sad.. i hope she can stop.. if this is a personal poem i hope one day you can stop
2nd Sep 2010 3:22am
26th Sep 2010 2:52pm
if you ever need someone to talk to who understands then feel free to talk to me as i'm in similar circumstances. x
19th Dec 2010 2:34am
I send my love out to you..your poem was great and I too have a poem relating to this one I believe it is called.....oh idk! Well keep writing the poems are great! :)
