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Stuck
I don't want to be here or there;
I don't want to be anywhere.
I want to be nonexistent.
I wish I weren't so pessimistic.
So much hate inside my soul;
I'm growing weak, I'm growing cold.
I try and try to make things right;
Every day all I do is fight.
Fighting myself, and fighting you.
Waiting for the day I come unglued.
I want to leave, I want to go.
And as a person, I want to grow.
I don't want to be anywhere.
I want to be nonexistent.
I wish I weren't so pessimistic.
So much hate inside my soul;
I'm growing weak, I'm growing cold.
I try and try to make things right;
Every day all I do is fight.
Fighting myself, and fighting you.
Waiting for the day I come unglued.
I want to leave, I want to go.
And as a person, I want to grow.
Published 27th Nov 2012
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27th Nov 2012 8:05pm
3rd Dec 2012 4:16pm
27th Nov 2012 9:51pm
so said the Seuss's Grinch? I couldn't help but hear the sing-song rhythm while reading the first two lines (and it stuck throughout). Still, I like it! Good job Coinin.
3rd Dec 2012 4:18pm
Hahaha, I just realized it!!
Made it more interesting for even ME to read! Lol!
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for the comment! (:
Made it more interesting for even ME to read! Lol!
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for the comment! (:
28th Nov 2012 00:14am
Anonymous
29th Nov 2012 6:12am
This poem is inspiring in a way to tell people to stop living in place where you dont want to leave, but you know that you have to and just to let go, to let yourself, as you said, grow.
3rd Dec 2012 4:19pm
Very true. This poem has multiple meanings for me,
And I'm glad you found meaning it, too. (:
Thank you for your comment.
And I'm glad you found meaning it, too. (:
Thank you for your comment.
