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cookie-cutter living
it took me somewhere
between a few minutes
and a few years
to realize how the world
had made me into someone
who disregards breathing and
disparages love but instead
gave me reason to sanction
tight-knit half-glares at
those counting their ineptitude
towards overlooking
scenery and applaud any excuse
to smirk at myself
holding deadly-cold hands
Published 26th Nov 2012
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26th Nov 2012 10:06am
This is so fucking powerful and honest.
If I weren't already in love with some of your other poems
id say itd be my favorite.
If I weren't already in love with some of your other poems
id say itd be my favorite.
27th Nov 2012 9:28am
kameron
a constraint writing again..in a perfect cut of block...those spaces in b/w to make them blocks indeed adds to the required pause n stressed meanings .
loved the essence you express harshly here..a stereotypical living devoid of what nature offers!
excellent piece again & thanxx fr this share:)
a constraint writing again..in a perfect cut of block...those spaces in b/w to make them blocks indeed adds to the required pause n stressed meanings .
loved the essence you express harshly here..a stereotypical living devoid of what nature offers!
excellent piece again & thanxx fr this share:)
