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not me
(entered in "talk to yourself" comp)
met a younger me
bought him a beer
he is still painting
has love in his eyes
in his hands
earned the eyes
through hands
and
I don't need to tell him
who I am
that
this barstool
is about all he has
to look forward to
he knows
that I'm thinking it
that I'm just weak
and that he can avoid it
same as me
back then
met a younger me
bought him a beer
he is still painting
has love in his eyes
in his hands
earned the eyes
through hands
and
I don't need to tell him
who I am
that
this barstool
is about all he has
to look forward to
he knows
that I'm thinking it
that I'm just weak
and that he can avoid it
same as me
back then
Published 26th Nov 2012
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26th Nov 2012 3:30am
26th Nov 2012 3:38am
Anonymous
26th Nov 2012 2:14pm
Yep, can relate lightbaron.
Good Luck.
Strider
Good Luck.
Strider
26th Nov 2012 4:05pm
5th Dec 2012 9:13pm
He knows better than to argue with you, doesn't feel like wasting his energy arguing on a theoretical conceptual debate over all that he knows you "think" you know. He's too strong to go through the pains of your incessant dominating of his perspective and mental superiority over the place of the present moment in which u stand before him, facing him with. He's really seeing more of you than you, because his eyes are that way, he's really thinking "Man, you don't even know what the fuck you're sitting on..."
5th Dec 2012 11:08pm
Yeah what she said ^
more than spot on Ms. Selah.
couldn't have hoped for a more in depth take.
thank you kindly for shedding some light for me,.and dropping some thoughts
more than spot on Ms. Selah.
couldn't have hoped for a more in depth take.
thank you kindly for shedding some light for me,.and dropping some thoughts
