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Life
Time is a solid steel wall that we fight against everyday.
In the short amount that we're given we struggle for a good and meaningful life.
Through that struggle we encounter problems, obstacles, set backs and hardships which teach us lessons.
But the only way to learn is to want to learn.
Some say that death is tough, but I say that to live is even tougher.
Death is like the release from a trap, a way of passage from one life to the next.
While life is a hold on a forged existence that you and the ones before you have obtained.
In the short amount that we're given we struggle for a good and meaningful life.
Through that struggle we encounter problems, obstacles, set backs and hardships which teach us lessons.
But the only way to learn is to want to learn.
Some say that death is tough, but I say that to live is even tougher.
Death is like the release from a trap, a way of passage from one life to the next.
While life is a hold on a forged existence that you and the ones before you have obtained.
Published 25th Nov 2012
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2012 7:46am
Interesting piece here, Life and death connect, they are of the same, in the middle is man....
25th Nov 2012 11:55pm
29th Nov 2012 4:33am
29th Nov 2012 8:11am
Thank you for taking the time to read it, I feel that it still needs some work, but I'm glad you enjoyed :)
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