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no notice me please

I want to know for everything of note I was.


If ever I’m known for noticing the objects I only seek to notice;
and hope that me not noticing will make me the reason they don’t give as much as notice,
rather than be cruelly gawked at by men that notice us both, noting our beat.
We will know we noticed something you and me not worth noting in times like ours, maybe more.  You won’t, until I’m noticed in terms of periphery, but in note of degradation.



If ever I’m known for not noticing the objects I only seek to notice;
and hope that me not noticing will make me the reason they don’t give as much as notice, rather than be cruelly gawked at by men that notice us both, noting our beat.
We will know we noticed something you and me not noticing more of what you won’t, until I’m noticed, I want to be known for everything I note. I love you.
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