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Abysmal Slumber
I sense sleep coming soon
All alone in my dark room
Pitch black and empty
Just me, and not even me
For I am, no more
I can't think, therefore I am not
I only desire to dive into this slumber
I will let myself sink down under
No struggle back to the surface
Pitch black, no sense, no purpose
All alone in my dark room
Pitch black and empty
Just me, and not even me
For I am, no more
I can't think, therefore I am not
I only desire to dive into this slumber
I will let myself sink down under
No struggle back to the surface
Pitch black, no sense, no purpose
Published 22nd Nov 2012
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27th Nov 2012 9:54pm
Oh, I can't tell if this will help my insomnia or make it worse... I got that falling feeling reading this.
Good flow and rhythm.
Good flow and rhythm.
27th Nov 2012 11:07pm
Thanks a ton. Had a dual image in mind of sleep/death. I got heavily "medicated" and felt a loss of all sensory perception
Pitch blackness was last I remember b4 passing out
Pitch blackness was last I remember b4 passing out
