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Why Am I Still Crying? (Pt. 1)
A few months ago you broke
my heart, smashed it with a
metaphorical hammer.
You scraped my insides out
with your fingers and then
laughed as I bled to death
before you.
Despite this, my tears are
coming out of my eyes as I
think of something that reminds
me of you.
Why the fuck am I still crying?
Why do you affect me so much
that I can't move past this
pain?
Why did I waste my heart's time
on a demon like you?
my heart, smashed it with a
metaphorical hammer.
You scraped my insides out
with your fingers and then
laughed as I bled to death
before you.
Despite this, my tears are
coming out of my eyes as I
think of something that reminds
me of you.
Why the fuck am I still crying?
Why do you affect me so much
that I can't move past this
pain?
Why did I waste my heart's time
on a demon like you?
Published 22nd Nov 2012
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22nd Nov 2012 11:22am
22nd Nov 2012 11:30am
Thank you very much for your comment, I appreciate that you noticed the heart behind the words.
22nd Nov 2012 11:55am
Yes...been there...bitter poem of sadness and regret...well writen, very. Hope you are well.
22nd Nov 2012 11:57am
Indeed, thanks for the comment and the well wishing.
I was reminded of an ex today, so this came out.
I was reminded of an ex today, so this came out.
25th Nov 2012 8:43am
Too many of us can say that we have been in this position. Torn down by one we loved and felt what we thought was love in return only to be crushed beneath their feet, squeezed until no life remains within us.
26th Nov 2012 6:38pm
