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" A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
To Good to be true?
my slumber un-disturbed
a erie wasteland
cast in a montage
of scattred black and white.
Sunlight seeps through cracks in the ice
dreams come and go like freinds in the night
liquid life distilled
somewhere the tea is getting cold
somewhere my soul has been sold.
sleep is nouthing more then a sneak preveiw of death.
oxygen flows to the brain
my pulse remains steady
my eyes flicker
like petal's in summer,
one eye slowley open's
and i wake up
SCREAMING!!!!
my slumber un-disturbed
a erie wasteland
cast in a montage
of scattred black and white.
Sunlight seeps through cracks in the ice
dreams come and go like freinds in the night
liquid life distilled
somewhere the tea is getting cold
somewhere my soul has been sold.
sleep is nouthing more then a sneak preveiw of death.
oxygen flows to the brain
my pulse remains steady
my eyes flicker
like petal's in summer,
one eye slowley open's
and i wake up
SCREAMING!!!!
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Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 11:32am
Oh My friend the sleepless slumber of the never ending night is never good. I will fight it all the way to the pearly gates.Nice.
Red
Red
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re: Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 11:34am
Thanks very much red, sleepless slumber is not my freind lol. Good to have you back red.
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
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20th Nov 2012 11:36am
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re: Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 11:38am
Cheers my freind i love sleeping its the wakeing up i have a problem with lol
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 12:16pm
re: Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 12:59pm
lol i did that the other day, hate it when that happens.
many thanks for reading dude
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading dude
cheers
marcus
Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 2:28pm
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20th Nov 2012 2:56pm
Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
Anonymous
20th Nov 2012 3:14pm
Did it this morning, marcus!
nice write
strider
nice write
strider
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20th Nov 2012 3:18pm
Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 3:26pm
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20th Nov 2012 4:56pm
Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 4:04pm
I can't wait for that to good to be true feeling, its been so long.
Great ditty Marcus.
Great ditty Marcus.
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re: Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 4:58pm
Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 5:58pm
cool poem as always and the title is a nod to the great john cooper clarke If I ain't mistaken
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re: Re: " A Sneak Preveiw Of Death"
20th Nov 2012 6:17pm
you are correct I had trouble with a title so I figured it was perfect for the poem.
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus