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Klaxon Days
Klaxon days
are candy days
without the stripes
the muted wind
that blows tree tops
down into the corner vision of your eye
Daylight cracking of torn windswept billboards
rain turning the day rusty
lights on at 3 in the afternoon
stuffed steamy shopping centre
of no hope people
yoga in coffee shops
and whiplash girls
in brothels
trying to be tender
are candy days
without the stripes
the muted wind
that blows tree tops
down into the corner vision of your eye
Daylight cracking of torn windswept billboards
rain turning the day rusty
lights on at 3 in the afternoon
stuffed steamy shopping centre
of no hope people
yoga in coffee shops
and whiplash girls
in brothels
trying to be tender
Published 20th Nov 2012
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20th Nov 2012 12:40pm
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except for the horn, I couldnt relate to the Klaxon thing.. locale??
guess I'm deaf that way
beyond that verse I really liked the imagery and the over-under cast story I got from this. the en was too brief for me.. had the piece conclude like it was missing a D.
I could've went abit farther.
except for the horn, I couldnt relate to the Klaxon thing.. locale??
guess I'm deaf that way
beyond that verse I really liked the imagery and the over-under cast story I got from this. the en was too brief for me.. had the piece conclude like it was missing a D.
I could've went abit farther.
21st Nov 2012 11:18am
