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CRITICS

critic,
you are someone who never actually goes to the battle,
yet who afterwards you come out shooting the wounded
you criticize and politicize like you will be awarded
your words seem expensive so your i doubt i can afford it,
so i avoid it

just doing what i do and i shall never quit,if you havent noticed my dreams and i shall never split, and before you come at me
make sure you have your permit, you hypocrite
Cause any fool can criticize, condemn, and complain but it takes character and self control to be understanding and uplifting.

Its called positive critisicsm, and you critic your just merely a legless man who teaches people how to run
because your dream is undone
soo, if you aint got anything to say shun your tongue and be gon...
Written by Skeeter-yocousin
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