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normal?
love
not the normal kind
the kind that devours
all that remains
a cannibal
stealing our lives
draining them away
for eternity.
pain
not the normal kind
the one that provides
sweet anguish
a savior
produing our lives
providing the reality
that we need.
love
the kind that flies away
the one that leaves
an empty heart
a void
burning in the soul
showing me the ways
of this world.
pain
the kind you want to keep
the one you want to hold
in your hand forever
a lover
keeping you in the world
staying with you
where ever you go.
not the normal kind
the kind that devours
all that remains
a cannibal
stealing our lives
draining them away
for eternity.
pain
not the normal kind
the one that provides
sweet anguish
a savior
produing our lives
providing the reality
that we need.
love
the kind that flies away
the one that leaves
an empty heart
a void
burning in the soul
showing me the ways
of this world.
pain
the kind you want to keep
the one you want to hold
in your hand forever
a lover
keeping you in the world
staying with you
where ever you go.
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Re: normal?
Anonymous
19th Nov 2012 1:29am
Very nice. You're get better with every poem. :)
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Re: normal?
19th Nov 2012 8:37pm
Re: normal?
20th Nov 2012 00:55am
thanks, but my name is Santina
coz' i'm not ur sister, nor do
i like being called Tina; it reminds
me of shit.
coz' i'm not ur sister, nor do
i like being called Tina; it reminds
me of shit.
Re: normal?
20th Nov 2012 7:53pm
Hmmm what's normal in a world full of alternate perspectives, I like this it's thought provoking and I get kind of a philosophical feeling from it!
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25th Nov 2012 00:37am
Re: normal?
26th Nov 2012 9:46am
This is a really good write.It feels like you let your pen carry you from the first word to the last very smoothly and didn't try to think or do too much.Nice one.
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Re: normal?
26th Nov 2012 12:46pm
Re: normal?
26th Nov 2012 8:05pm
*might get sued but* It's a bitter sweet symphony.
Seriously though great work, you have a lot of potential in your twisted shattered soul.
Seriously though great work, you have a lot of potential in your twisted shattered soul.
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2nd Dec 2012 6:22am
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