deepundergroundpoetry.com
"Perception"
I see you how you would like to be seen
move past deception
alter your perception
is anything truly as it seems?
shattered visage
a faceless facade
a mirage in the centre of the city
shower me with raindrops
composed of pity
your cries for help
have been heard
help is on the way
just give me the word
dear friend
just say the word.
Friendships don’t just die and falter
sure, they change and may alter
seek my advice its free to receive
don’t hit your head on the way out
when you leave.
Make sure you receive the help that you need
I gave you fair warning
now is the time to heal and heed.
I see how you would like to be seen
move past deception
alter your perception.
move past deception
alter your perception
is anything truly as it seems?
shattered visage
a faceless facade
a mirage in the centre of the city
shower me with raindrops
composed of pity
your cries for help
have been heard
help is on the way
just give me the word
dear friend
just say the word.
Friendships don’t just die and falter
sure, they change and may alter
seek my advice its free to receive
don’t hit your head on the way out
when you leave.
Make sure you receive the help that you need
I gave you fair warning
now is the time to heal and heed.
I see how you would like to be seen
move past deception
alter your perception.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 0
comments 14
reads 878
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: "Perception"
Anonymous
15th Nov 2012 5:58pm
Nice write, Marcus, last lines are powerful lines, move past deception, alter your perception, true, wished more people could do that.....

1

re: Re: "Perception"
15th Nov 2012 8:09pm
Thanks very much this was very much a random write, i wish people could do that also.
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: "Perception"
15th Nov 2012 6:49pm
re: Re: "Perception"
15th Nov 2012 8:10pm
cheers nikki not bad a random write i guess, must have had somthing on my mind lol.
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
Re: "Perception"
15th Nov 2012 7:33pm
re: Re: "Perception"
15th Nov 2012 8:12pm
Re: "Perception"
15th Nov 2012 9:00pm
I think not only this poem but all your poetry show how you can touch base with all topics much talent my friend
1

re: Re: "Perception"
15th Nov 2012 9:47pm
Cheers dude that means a lot, i try my best.
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
Re: "Perception"
Anonymous
15th Nov 2012 9:03pm
Nice write Marcus....it's versatile.
Strider
Strider

1

re: Re: "Perception"
15th Nov 2012 9:48pm
Re: "Perception"
16th Nov 2012 2:45am
wow...thought-provoking and powerful piece, Marcus...one of my favorite of your poems...great job, my friend
1

Re: "Perception"
16th Nov 2012 7:40am
cheers faith, this was such a random write, glad you like it
many thanks
marcus
many thanks
marcus
Re: "Perception"
16th Nov 2012 9:57am
"move past deception
alter your perception
is anything truly as it seems?"
And that is the question Marcus, who truly knows. Maybe everything is just a mirage created from thousands upon thousands of perceptions, everything comes from a thought. "We are what we think"
How we could mould ourselves into exactly what we wish if we took that on board and truly believed it. Any thing becomes possible.
Great write Marcus, got my mind working overtime :)
alter your perception
is anything truly as it seems?"
And that is the question Marcus, who truly knows. Maybe everything is just a mirage created from thousands upon thousands of perceptions, everything comes from a thought. "We are what we think"
How we could mould ourselves into exactly what we wish if we took that on board and truly believed it. Any thing becomes possible.
Great write Marcus, got my mind working overtime :)
1

re: Re: "Perception"
16th Nov 2012 1:17pm
Thank you very much, i to seem to think way to much lol, i agree i dont think anyone knows its all about "perception" the secret perhaps?
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus